Pinaki Sarkar

June 2025 - Lunch ?
About the Image(s)
Technical: f/5.6, 1/160, 600mm, Pattern. Processed through Lightroom.
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3 comments posted
Allen Kurth
If this were my shot, I would crop out the water on the left nearly to the tail. Good Work!   Posted: 06/11/2025 14:27:26
Nice shot. I think the background looks a bit too bright. I agree with Allen's comment on cropping out water on the right of the image.   Posted: 06/13/2025 22:17:28
The story is clear, and your exposure in general is excellent. It's a little weird that the bird itself has almost no shadow and there is what looks like a very dark shadow on the fish - though the latter could be a bit of completely black seaweed?
I agree you have more space behind the bird than in front, making it appear that the subject is leaving the frame. I tried just cropping it into a 3x2 ratio, with a tiny bit off the bottom as well. This places the bird's head near you UL power point, and makes the bird's size relative to the image more pleasing.
Lillian   Posted: 06/21/2025 14:19:27
I agree you have more space behind the bird than in front, making it appear that the subject is leaving the frame. I tried just cropping it into a 3x2 ratio, with a tiny bit off the bottom as well. This places the bird's head near you UL power point, and makes the bird's size relative to the image more pleasing.
Lillian   Posted: 06/21/2025 14:19:27