Lillian Roberts, APSA, GMPSA/B
October 2024 - Quivertrees Far and Near
About the Image(s)
This is a favorite image of mine from my recent trip to Namibia. The Quivertrees are endemic to a small region there, difficult to get to, accommodations are basic. Several other images from the region have gained acceptances but this one, which I had high hopes for, has been rejected several times in different countries and by a wide range of judges. I’d like some input on what isn’t working.
It has also failed to gain acceptances in PIDC and PIDM, which tells me there is a significant pictorial flaw I’m missing.
Shutter speed: 1/640 sec
Aperture: 22
Exposure mode: Manual
Exposure compensation: +1 2/3
Flash: Off
Metering mode: Multi-segment
ISO: 6400
Lens: FE 24-105mm F4 G OSS
Focal length: 43mm
Adjustments in Blacks, Whites, Shadows and Highlights, and High Pass Sharpening.
5 comments posted
Given light conditions as taken, I would take my landscape image in the sweet spot of the lens - about f11. Perhaps you were going for the most depth of field? The f22 aperture will defintely caused refraction and the resulting image will loss sharpness. Landscape photos can be both exposure bracketed and focus bracketed when it is desired to have everything in focus. At 43 mm focal length the camera can easily shoot at 1/100 sec. With these settings the resulting iso will be close to 100. I am comfortable providing these technical considerations.
I am not as comfortable providing tips for compositions as beauty is in the eye of the beholder. Ask yourself what is the subject of this image. Ask yourself what is the foreground, middle ground and background. Will other viewers provide similar answers? Does the composition fit any gridlines like rule of thirds and such. What aspect ratio would show off the subjects? Perhaps a 2:1 or 3:1 pano would like nice. All these are considerations that help the image hang together with complementary elements.
It is easier to see compositions in black & white.
It takes a long time to create a landscape photo. I may have to take the same shot dozens of times to work the scene and to get the corners of my image as clean as possible. How many photos did you take of this scene?
  Posted: 10/05/2024 11:25:41
  Posted: 10/11/2024 12:20:10
Lillian   Posted: 10/19/2024 18:50:51