Jamie Federick
April 2024 - Brotherly Love
About the Image(s)
Here is my Image for April. It is entitled "Brotherly Love". Taken with my Canon Rebel 6i at 1/200 sec, f/13, ISO 800 and 40mm. I took it into Lightroom and into Topaz DeNoise and Topaz Sharpen. It evokes a feeling of love and caring. The big brother is trying to help his little sister and keep her from picking the flowers at the Arboretum.
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8 comments posted
Jamie, very warm and colorful image of the kids interactions and the tulips. It is a pity that the one standing has his face completely covered by the hat which takes away a lot of the impact of the story. It is always to have some visible eye contact. Posted: 04/04/2024 16:15:42
subject in RGB at yellow b/g. looks so pretty. Nice mood captured, though story is v simple Posted: 04/07/2024 07:13:53
The story is very sweet. I think it would be a stronger image if you could get down lower so the viewer isn't looking down on the children and could see both faces in the interaction. Posted: 04/07/2024 09:05:08
What a good idea! Karen Kohn Posted: 04/15/2024 18:40:32
Hi Jamie!
The image does not convey much to me, from my point of view it is a simple image without elaboration at the time of taking it, I think that for what you wanted to convey you could have changed the shooting angle and showed the expressions as a strong point of the story. Posted: 04/09/2024 14:56:59
The image does not convey much to me, from my point of view it is a simple image without elaboration at the time of taking it, I think that for what you wanted to convey you could have changed the shooting angle and showed the expressions as a strong point of the story. Posted: 04/09/2024 14:56:59
I agree! Posted: 04/11/2024 14:35:09
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Hi Jamie, there is a sweet story here about the children in the garden, it almost seems like the boy is teaching the younger one. I do agree with Ardeth that a different perpective (get down lower to eye level so that we can see the expressions on the children's faces) which will help you tell a stronger story. Posted: 04/11/2024 01:47:49
I agree and which I had done so! Posted: 04/11/2024 14:34:56